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Friday, 2 August 2019

the tunnels of north Korea



today we learnt Korean with ms Han. ms Han had just come back from Korea with some photos and a list of the different places she visited, so we could researcher it and post it to our blogs. Hope you enjoy it.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 August 2019 at 14:00

    Hi George

    I liked the way you put lots of photos of Korea, I didn’t know about all the facts of Korea, maybe next time you could put the place names in Korean

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  2. Anonymous8 August 2019 at 11:33

    Hi George, Jackson here

    Its really cool how you added lots of photos to explain what the place looked like, would you like to go to South Korea? Maybe next time you could add a little more information to the slides.

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  3. Anonymous9 August 2019 at 12:21

    Kia ora George,


    I really enjoyed your slideshow and how u put lots of facts on the North Korean Tunnels.
    Maybe next time check your spelling and grammar ( ms han - Ms Han ) and find more clear photos with credits, and also watch your fonts because you can see you copied and pasted it ( aka size and font was different ) but overall great job :) What was your favourite fact on the North Korean Tunnels.

    Jasmine

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  4. Mr Adams13 August 2019 at 08:37

    What a great and interesting blog post George. Jasmine has raised some really important points, I hope you read what she has added and take them onboard. Try and make your font a little larger so it is easier to see. When you copy and paste information from the Internet, you need to make sure that you put it into your own words, maybe do it on a Googledoc first and then put it into your blog. I can show you how to do this.
    Keep up the great blogging and well done. Would you like to visit the tunnels one day?

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  5. Anonymous21 August 2019 at 10:32

    hello George,
    I really enjoyed your slideshow. I like how you included some photos. Next time you should choose a different text colour because it blended in and was a bit hard to read. Do you want to go to the North Korea tunnels?

    ~Rosie :)

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